The Candidate’s Daughter was really frustrating. It was exciting, thrilling, and a great plot. But it was frustrating enought that I chose to stop and not finish it, even though I really wanted to know what happened.
There were a few issues I had. The first was the characters; the Candidate in question was a total ass, only caring about his campaign instead of his daughter. His assistant was brutal. She used the kidnapping to boost his campeign. Like, who does that? The boyfriend of the main character girl was horrible too. The girl was portrayed as weak and stupid, the woman was made to look like a weak closet alcoholic. It’s really hard to keep reading a book when you hate all the characters.
Another issue I had was the unrealisticness of the situation. The “investigation” the police executed was less effort than what would have happened if someone had thrown a brick through a window. Also the police don’t deal with kidnappings; the FBI does. So there’s that.
But the biggest problem I had was the redundancy of the conversations. The main characters were portrayed as whiny incompetent women--and that's fine, that's not where my issue is. I mean it's definitely annoying, but the biggest issue I had was the same conversations happened between the husband and wife, the boyfriend and girlfriend, over and over. I felt like a dog chasing it's tail.
I still want to know what happens, but I"m not willing to sit through the 2 hours I have left in order to find out.
About the book
The plan is simple: kidnap the daughter of Senate candidate Richard McClaine, take the money and run. Nobody gets hurt, the kid goes home alive.
Twenty-two-year-old car thief Kelsey Money thinks it's the worst idea Matt and his drug-fueled brother have ever come up with. But Matt's the planner. He's the one Kelsey has always depended on.
Then, she discovers she only knew half the plan. By the time she finds out the rest, she's been framed for murder, and six-year-old Holly McClaine won't be found alive.
Across town, Elizabeth McClaine has no idea what her daughter was wearing when she disappeared. When Holly was born with Down syndrome and a cleft palate, Elizabeth placed her only child in the care of a nanny while she fought postpartum depression.
But when Holly is kidnapped and Elizabeth discovers the detective leading the hunt has already failed one kidnapped child, Elizabeth knows she cannot fail hers.
Now, both women have 24 hours to find Holly. Because in 25, she'll be dead.